27 May 2009

Fragrance

Mind full of thoughts
Agony of undone acts
Mysteries of your mind
Actions in plain
Lovely moments
With you around you
So much in pursuit
Reality in dispute
I see you across the table
I watch the glare in your eyes
As a sunshine from a distant coast
Biting aspirations of your belongingness
Piercing me and hurting me
I run around like a maniac
I realize my heart beating faster
The fragrance of you stronger
Devoid if your thoughts for me
I hold your fragrance in me.

12 comments:

  1. Very nice one :) Anjali

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  2. "I see you across the table
    I watch the glare in your eyes
    As a sunshine from a distant coast
    Biting aspirations of your belongingness
    Piercing me and hurting me"

    Such beautiful lines.
    I liked the picture equally.
    Keep up the good work buddy. :-)

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  3. very soothing n calm..nice peace of work :)

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  4. Anjali@: Thanks so much do take care and be happy. I wish you all the luck.

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  5. Vinnie: Thanks a ton..........notthing can match ur fiction 55, and yes thanks so much about the picture, i have to find look hard for them, so now i have decided to take up photography.

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  6. wildchild: Hi there nothing can be as intense than what you write.... you dont know but your poems are like a mirror image of my emotion......just have little words when it comes to describing you.

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  7. Swati: Thanks a ton buddy.......

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  8. Thanks buddy. I'm glad you like my blog posts.
    You are my favourite blogger. :-)
    I find your writing intense.

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  9. As sunshine from a distant coast...nice imagery...

    I hold your fragrance in me... That was so sool...

    Kinda reminded me of bryam adams song - please forgive me... 'I remember the smeel of your skin, I remember everything'

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  10. Apocalyse: Thanks a ton buddy

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  11. kahan kayam hogaye the aap... glad u r back... :)

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